I've started some new blogs and here is a short Haiku... wait... all Haiku's are short, that I published online fitting the 5-7-5 parameters depending on how you define 'on' (moras).
BBG
Haight Summer
Obvious Oblivious
To Be Same Is Is
Obvious Oblivious
To Be Same Is Is
So you think I have a problem with baby boomers? ... Don't we all?
Were expecting something mushy? ... Sorry!
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I'll comment on my own post. (starving to death for attention I now allow anonymous posters)
The mid line very well could be 9, because diphthongs are 1 'on' (making the 's' at the end of the words another 'on'?), but that can't be helped. I'm thinking the last could be 6. So how do I change it to match the first line with 5?
BBG
Haight Summer
Obvious Oblivious
To Be Same Is... Is
That's how. It keeps with the point of the poem depending on how you look at it.
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